http://amy.pollien.com/2009/08/06/new-work-6/ Art and bees. Bees and art. Sat, 21 Jan 2012 22:42:05 -0700 hourly 1 http://wordpress.org/?v=3.1 http://amy.pollien.com/2009/08/06/new-work-6/comment-page-1/#comment-91 Susan Thu, 13 Aug 2009 18:46:01 +0000 http://amy.pollien.com/?p=399#comment-91 Okay you are making me work for this one. I would delete "behind the shops." Aren't they on the other side of the street? If you want to emphasize what part of the Bar Harbor you're painting, keep the Schoodic part. Delete low tide. The onlooker has to be able to figure out something, and even I can tell it's low tide from the pier pilings. So, "Bar Harbor on a midsummer morning, looking toward Schoodic Peninsula" or "looking toward Schoodic Peninsula, on a midsummer morning in Bar Harbor" And thank you so much for your kind words. Okay you are making me work for this one. I would delete “behind the shops.” Aren’t they on the other side of the street? If you want to emphasize what part of the Bar Harbor you’re painting, keep the Schoodic part. Delete low tide. The onlooker has to be able to figure out something, and even I can tell it’s low tide from the pier pilings. So, “Bar Harbor on a midsummer morning, looking toward Schoodic Peninsula” or “looking toward Schoodic Peninsula, on a midsummer morning in Bar Harbor”
And thank you so much for your kind words.

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